Poems by Walt Whitman
Athenæum 2113
(25 April 1868), 585-6.
The selections here given from the po-ems of Walt Whitman form, we
are told, nearly half of
his entire works. Mr. Rossetti's objects in the present compilation
have been, first, to exclude every
poem that could fairly be deemed of-fensive; and, secondly, to include
whatever, being free from just or unjust censure on the ground of decorum,
is at the same time highest as poetry and most
characteristic of the writer. The editor has wisely, and with a proper
reverence for one in whose
genius he believes, refrained from culling what are called "beauties"
from such poems as might be
thought objectionable. He has hacked and spoilt no piece by depriving
it of the unity and continuity
which make it vital; and thus, though we have not here the whole of
Whitman, what we have is
genuinely his own. It follows from the process adopted that we
are not now called upon to weigh the accusations which have been brought
against the writer in America for his license of expression
in morals (morals being, of course, to be understood in a special and
restricted sense), but simply
to examine his credentials as a poet.
In a Preface which, on the whole, is written with his usual discernment
and happiness of exposition, Mr. Rossetti observes of Whitman, "He may
be termed formless by those who, not without much
reason to show for themselves, are wedded to the established forms
and ratified refinements of poetic art; but it seems reasonable to enlarge
the canon till it includes so great and startling a genius, rather than
to draw it close and exclude him." We see, however, no reason why the usual
definition of an art should be changed for the sake of embracing in its
limits one who might otherwise stand without them. The question now at
issue, is not whether Mr. Whitman is a great thinker, but whether he is
a great poet. Now, by common consent the vital constituents of poetry are
emotion and imagination. By imagination we mean the power of conceiving
ideas and of representing them by adequate symbols to the senses.
Judged by this admitted test, what shall we say of Walt Whitman? That
some entire poems in this collection, and many scattered passages in other
poems, bear the test triumphantly, few, if qualified to judge, will doubt.
On the other hand, we have here many pages (probably the greater number)
of which it would be difficult to maintain that they are poetry in
any sense of that word which has yet
been accepted. Thus, in the address 'To Working Men,' who can say that,
however exalted by the
prevailing idea of the piece, any item in the following catalogue,
with the one exception marked in italics, is in itself poetical? -
House-building, measuring, sawing
the boards;
Blacksmithing, glass-blowing,
nail-making, coopering, tin-roofing,
shingle-dressing,
Ship-joining, dock-building, fish-curing,
ferrying, flagging of side-walks
by flaggers,
The pump, the pile-driver, the
great derrick, the coal-kiln and brick-kiln,
Coal-mines, and all that is down
there, - the lamps in the darkness, echoes,
songs, what meditations, what vast native thoughts looking through
smutched faces,
Iron-works, forge-fires in the
mountains, or by the riverbanks -
men around feeling the melt with huge crowbars - lumps of ore,
the due combining of ore, limestone, coal - the blast-furnace and
the puddling-furnace, the loup-lump at the bottom of the melt at last -
the rolling-mill, the stumpy bars of pig-iron, the strong, clean-shaped
T-rail for railroads;
Oil-works, silk-works, white-lead-works,
the sugar-house, steam-saws,
the great mills and factories.
Even in the composition called 'A Poet,' which, besides its high strain
of thought, is very interesting as a revelation of Whitman's individuality,
there is far more of theory than of imagination. When
he writes of the poet -
Him all wait for - him all yield
up to - his word is decisive and final,
Him they accept, in him lave,
in him perceive themselves, as amid light,
Him they immerse, and he immerses
them.
Beautiful women, the haughtiest
nations, laws, the landscape,
people, animals,
The profound earth and its attributes,
and the unquiet ocean
(so tell I my morning's romanza),
All enjoyments and properties,
and money, and whatever
money will buy,
The best farms - others toiling
and planting, and he unavoidably reaps,
The noblest and costliest cities
- others grading and building,
and he domiciles there,
Nothing for anyone, but what is
for him - near and far are for him,
- the ships in the offing,
The perpetual shows and marches
on land, are for him, if they are
for anybody -
the reader may or may not find in the lines truth of doctrine, but he assuredly
will not find
beauty of expression. Turning, on the contrary, to the pieces named
respectively 'Assimilations,' 'Burial,' 'The Waters,' 'A Ship,' 'President
Lincoln's Funeral Hymn,' and 'A Word out of the Sea,' he will scarcely
deny that they possess striking truth and beauty of description, and, still
better, that subtle and informing power which unobtrusively converts all
outward things into symbols, just as the soul makes for itself a symbol
of the body which it pervades and rules. This unconscious power of
symbolization - quite distinct from, and even opposed to, the mechanical
ingenuity of allegory - is
nowhere more delightfully evinced by Whitman than in 'A Word out of
the Sea,' to our thinking
the poem of the book. A boy discovers a bird's-nest in some
briars that skirt the sea-shore. Day
after day he watches the movements of the male bird and his mate, listens
to the singing and the chirping by which they express their happiness.
At length,
May-be killed unknown to her mate,
One forenoon the she-bird crouched
not on the nest,
Nor returned that afternoon, nor
the next,
Nor ever returned again.
The boy continues to note the solitary bird flitting restlessly from spot
to spot on the shore, and at times pouring forth a mournful song, the desolation,
the longing and the brief beguiling hope of
which the listener translates into human speech. To the boy's ear the
bird sings as follows: -
Soothe! soothe! soothe!
Close on its wave soothes the
wave behind,
And again another behind, embracing
and lapping, every one close, -
But my love soothes not me, not
me.
Low hangs the moon - it rose late;
O it is lagging - O I think it
is heavy with love, with love.
O madly the sea pushes, pushes
upon the land,
With love - with love.
O night! do I not see my love
fluttering out there among the breakers?
What is that little black thing
I see there in the white?
Loud! loud! loud!
Loud I call to you, my love!
High and clear I shoot my voice
over the waves;
Surely you must know who is here,
is here;
You must know who I am, my love.
Low-hanging moon!
What is that dusky spot in your
brown yellow?
O it is the shape, the shape of
my mate!
O moon, do not keep her from me
any longer!
Land! land! O land!
Whichever way I turn, O I think
you could give me my mate back again,
if you only would;
For I am almost sure I see her
dimly whichever way I look.
O rising stars!
Perhaps the one I want so much
will rise, will rise with some of you.
O throat! O trembling throat!
Sound clearer through the atmosphere!
Pierce the woods, the earth;
Somewhere, listening to catch
you, must be the one I want.
Shake out, carols!
Solitary here - the night's carols!
Carols of lonesome love! Death's
carols!
Carols under that lagging, yellow,
waning moon!
O, under that moon, where she
droops almost down into the sea!
O reckless, despairing carols!
But soft! sink low;
Soft! let me just murmur;
And do you wait a moment, you
husky-nosed sea;
For somewhere I believe I heard
my mate responding to me,
So faint - I must be still, be
still to listen;
But not altogether still, for
then she might not come immediately to me.
Hither, my love!
Here I am! Here!
With this just sustained note
I announce myself to you;
This gentle call is for you, my
love, for you!
Do not be decoyed elsewhere!
O I am very sick and sorrowful!
O brown halo in the sky, near
the moon, drooping upon the sea!
O troubled reflection in the sea!
O throat! O throbbing heart!
O all! - and I singing uselessly,
uselessly all the night!
Yet I murmur, murmur on!
O murmurs - you yourselves make
me continue to sing, I know not why.
O past! O life! O songs of joy!
In the air - in the woods - over
fields;
Loved! loved! loved! loved! loved!
But my love no more, no more with
me!
We two together no more!
The plaint of the bird arouses in the boy, too, the sense of something
missed and yearned
for. A joy has vanished from the soul as its mate from the bird. Shall
the ideal of youth that has taken wing return to earth no more? Shall the
yearning for it ever be satisfied, and by what? -
Answering, the Sea,
Delaying not, hurrying not,
Whispered me through the night
and very plainly before daybreak,
Lisped to me the low and delicious
word death.
Of the sublimated passion and sweetness of the above, of the minuteness
with which the
most delicate transitions of feeling are caught, and of the grand yet
melancholy suggestiveness which sets the whole picture, as it were, in
a frame of sad sunset glory, we can hardly speak in terms of praise too
high. That Whitman can write noble poetry, this one example conclusively
testifies.
Of the writer, generally, it may be said, that he is universal in his
sympathies, (with the sole exception
that he cannot recognize the possibility of goodness in any man who
happens to be born an
aristocrat,) - that (with this exception) he believes in the capacity
for virtue, latent or developed, of all his fellows - believes that the
best man is but the full and perfected expression of the worth and power
hidden in the worst, - believes that in point of art it is right to express
in speech all that is true in fact, and to regard all processes and things,
natural or mechanical, that have once been associated with man as sanctified
thereby. The "homo sum" and the deductions drawn from it, have never
found a more zealous advocate.
It is difficult to describe a mind so varied and yet so peculiar in
a few phrases. Yet we will venture to designate Mr. Whitman as a wide,
sincere, passionate thinker, - presenting in himself a new
combination of separate views, which are not particularly new in themselves.
This is not said to his
disadvantage, for truisms, after all, lie at the root of the world's
progress. The expansiveness of his
mind includes imagination, no doubt, but rather as a constituent than
as a characteristic. He resembles those vast tracts of country in which
is found the utmost diversity of surface, and in which
long intervals of homely or even barren scenery precede and succeed
glorious manifestations of
Nature. He is so large and generic in his mode of thinking that he
often scatters beauty in the seed
rather than reveals it in the flowers; at other times, nothing can
surpass the truthful minuteness with
which he paints the most delicate nuances of feeling. He is
a fine poet, though it would be a great
error to say that all is poetry to which he has given the name.
For a brief and excellent summary of Whitman's life and writings, we
refer the reader to Mr. Rossetti's Preface - a composition disfigured only
by a somewhat puerile display of contempt for his
fellow critics. His allegations against them may or may not be just;
but their errors, if real, would have been more gracefully improved by
that superior example which Mr. Rossetti so consciously affords, than by
his unnecessary invectives.
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