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                <author>Walt Whitman</author>
                <editor>Kenneth M. Price</editor>
                <editor>Ed Folsom</editor>
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                <sponsor>University of Iowa</sponsor>
                <sponsor>University of Nebraska-Lincoln</sponsor>
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                <note type="project" target="#dat1">"Ah, Not This Granite Dead and Cold" was published first on <date when="1885-02-22">February 22, 1885</date>, in the Philadelphia <hi rend="italic">Press</hi>. The
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