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                <title level="m" type="main" rend="bracketed">Last of ebb</title>
                <title level="m" type="sub">a machine readable transcription</title>
                <author>Walt Whitman</author>
                <editor>Ken Price</editor>
                <editor>Ed Folsom</editor>
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                    <persName xml:id="lr">Lisa Renfro</persName>
                    <persName xml:id="jro">Jennifer R. Overkamp</persName>
                    <persName xml:id="aj">Andrew Jewell</persName>
                    <persName xml:id="kmp">Kenneth Price</persName>
                    <persName xml:id="bb">Brett Barney</persName>
                    <persName xml:id="nhg">Nicole Gray</persName>
                <persName xml:id="as">Ashlyn Stewart</persName></respStmt>
                <sponsor>The Institute for Advanced Technology in the Humanities</sponsor>
                <sponsor>University of Iowa</sponsor>
                <sponsor>University of Nebraska-Lincoln</sponsor>
                <funder>The National Endowment for the Humanities</funder>
                <funder>The United States Department of Education</funder>
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                    <date>2004</date>
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                <distributor>The Walt Whitman Archive</distributor>
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<addrLine>Alderman Library</addrLine>
<addrLine>University of Virginia</addrLine>
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                <note type="project" target="#dat1">This manuscript is a draft of the poem "Last of Ebb, and Daylight Waning," first
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                        Century</hi>. Whitman probably composed this manuscript shortly
                    before its publication in <date when="1885">1885</date>.</note>
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            <p>This manuscript is a draft of the poem "Last of Ebb, and Daylight Waning," first
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                <del rend="overstrike">last</del>
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                            <add place="supralinear" rend="unmarked">the</add></del> ebb, and daylight waning,</l>
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                        Scented sea‑breaths landward making—smells
                        <lb/>of <del rend="overstrike">the</del> salt and sedge incoming,
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                                        <del rend="overwrite" seq="1">a</del><add place="over" rend="overwrite" seq="2">the</add>
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                                        <add place="supralinear" rend="unmarked" seq="2">unnamed, <del rend="overstrike">borne down <add rend="unmarked" place="supralinear">off—</add></del></add></subst>—<del rend="overstrike">the</del> poets
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                                    <del rend="overwrite" seq="1">t</del><add rend="overwrite" place="over" seq="2">T</add></subst>o the boundless waste, <subst>
                                
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<add rend="unmarked" place="supralinear">on quicker yet</add> yet, ye
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