The MS. to—hand1
I am very glad indeed, & thankful, for all the capital suggestions & amendments you have made. I have followed them all, or am doing it. I have a good many little additions to make myself—things which the close work of concordance-making suggested to me. I will cut out everything you advise. As to Ballou2 & Scovel,3 I will cut out nearly everything of Ballou's retaining only a little to put with large quotations from Scovel's article. I can improve that personal chapter very much by working it over, smoothing down & melding things together more.
How wd that MS—"Of That Blithe Throat" &c—You gave me, do for a fac-simile page to put into the loc.02902.002_large.jpg Bibliography where I speak of your typographical finesse &c? Or wd you prefer to send me a clean draft of something in case the publishers thought best to give the fac-simile? People like to see the erasures &c I believe.
I have thought that I might perhaps get more from Chatto & Windus if I guaranteed them for three years against the republication of the book in this country. I am going to copyright it, here right away, or very soon. What wd you say to this—guaranteeing the British publisher the market?
An error in L. of G.By the way I suppose of course you have noticed that the characters "§ 9" of the Salut are by mistake omitted in L. of G.4
I have a nice letter form Scovel wh. I shall answer.
The hot weather has worked on me a little too.
As ever dear Walt W.S. KennedyI will omit Conway5 & Goldsmith entirely, & not sorry to do it.
If Morse6 makes a bust satisfactory to you, I shall have picture of it in the book.
Correspondent:
William Sloane Kennedy
(1850–1929) was on the staff of the Philadelphia American and the Boston Transcript; he also
published biographies of Longfellow, Holmes, and Whittier (Dictionary of American Biography [New York: Charles Scribner's Sons, 1933], 336–337). Apparently Kennedy called on
the poet for the first time on November 21, 1880 (William Sloane Kennedy, Reminiscences of Walt Whitman [London: Alexander
Gardener, 1896], 1). Though Kennedy was to become a fierce defender of Whitman,
in his first published article he admitted reservations about the "coarse
indecencies of language" and protested that Whitman's ideal of democracy was
"too coarse and crude"; see The Californian, 3 (February
1881), 149–158. For more about Kennedy, see Katherine Reagan, "Kennedy, William Sloane (1850–1929)," Walt
Whitman: An Encyclopedia, ed. J.R. LeMaster and Donald D. Kummings (New
York: Garland Publishing, 1998).